It’s writer Wednesday and today we are going to delve into the risque topic of fantasy profanity. Well, ok, it’s not all that risque. In fact, the reason many people like fantasy novels is that there is rarely ever any swearing.
Instead, we enter the world of alternate swearing. In a fantasy world there are different beliefs and different cultural practices that lead to different terms being considered profane, just like different English speaking countries have distinct swear words. Saying ‘bollocks’ or ‘bloody’ in the US barely gets an eyebrow raise because most people don’t know what they mean.
Using standard swearing in a fantasy novel doesn’t make sense because you wouldn’t expect an alternate civilization to develop the same swear words. When they are used they pull the reader from the narrative – a big NO NO.
Let’s see how these titles handle swearing –
Mazerunner, James Dashner: (I’m talking about the book, not the movie) The Gladers those who live withing the maze use ‘shuck’ and ‘clunk’ ans their stronger swears.
- Clunk is a direct replacement for sh%t and comes directly from the sound made when using the rustic bathroom – and yes, this is explained in the book.
- Shuck rhymes with fu%k for a reason.
- Other slang includes: shank, slim it, slinthead, greenbean, jacked, and bloody.
Wheel of Time, Robert Jordan and Brandon Sanderson: There are a plethora of these, for the complete list, check out the wiki. These words are tied directly to the world where much of the protagonists history includes blood, fire, and magic. The most popular swear words are the following:
- Flaming used much like we use ‘damn’ and expresses anger or hatred toward something or someone.
- Blasted a slightly stronger version of ‘flaming’
- Light used as an exclamation similar to how we use ‘god’
- Burn (me, you, etc) is also similiar to damn and is used when people are upset
- Blood and Ashes expresses anger and disgust.
Star Wars Universe: While this is sci/fi the same rules apply – it’s not our world or culture so the swear words would be different. I was actually surprised at how many of these there are, for a complete run down, including origins and definitions, check out this article.
- F-bomb substitutes: crink/crinking, farkled. kark/karking, kriff/kriffing, krong, Skrog/skrogging, snark/snarking (no relation to today’s snarky).
- S-word substitutes: druk, dwang, Holy Sith!, shab, shavit.
- Other Insults: Bantha poodoo, e chu ta, hutt-spawn, laserbrain/blaster brain, lurdo, nerf herder, schutta, sculag, sleemo, son of a blaster, stoopa, vong.
Needless to say, there are many ways to handle swearing in your world. The more deeply embedded into the culture and world, the better these insults will be. If your world has a lot of water elements then there should be some water related swearing and insults, wethead, salt and slime, salty, bilge, etc. A desert culture would use a different set that evoked images of heat, dry, and stench.
Whatever you do, make it meaningful. Random words used as swear words won’t affect your reader nearly as much as words that have a history and a purpose.
I have to say, Robert Jordan did the best job of this in the Wheel of Time. They are very carefully constructed and fit really well with the universe he has created. In comparison, the Star Wars profanity just sounds stupid and made-up.
I do believe you are biased sir – but I agree. 🙂
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There was a show called The 10th Kingdom where some orcs would say “suck an elf!” instead of f#cking hell.
This post reminded me of that.
I totally remember that! Did a double take the first time I heard it in the show.